PLAY IT LOUD!!! IN UR NEIGHBOURHOOD

This is one of my favourite Malaysian punk rock band & it's called One Buck Short.Their current line-up are Mooky is a vocal,Rahul is a guitarist,Izal on a bass & Imran the drummer.They formed in 2001 & founded by Rahul & Hafiz (former bass) during their secondary school (high school).They begin playing the shows at school event & "battle of the bands"competitions before they come out in the local scene.While their influences are Blink 182 & New Found Glory. Their debut single "That Day" from EP it's called Where's The Mouse?! & broke into Malaysian Top 10 charts in local radio station, Hitz.fm.They are also wrote the song "Christmas Morning" for a charity.Moreover they nominated as Best Newcomer artis in again Hitz.fm Malaysian English Top 10 in 2004.Later in 2007 they release the album called "Halal & Loving It",the first single is "Fast Times" & "10:04".Plus they also have Malay song it's called "Kelibat Korupsi" & it's about corruption.Futhermore, the band performed in several concert as opening act such as Good Charlottle & My Chemical Romance in Kuala Lumpur.Next even in Singapore such as Fall Out Boy & Avenged Sevenfold.Then they also appeared in Asian  X Games & here the playlist:

Now introducing another heavy metal band from UK called Judas Priest a.k.a GOD METAL.Their line up are Rob Halford on vocal,Ian Hill on bass,K.K Downing,Glen Tipton both on guitar & the only member based America Scott Travis the drummer.Yeah,...this band older than Maiden's & they come out onstage by wearing leather during live performance plus with Rob riding the Harley-Davidson chopper.

In the begining the the band formed in 1969 in Birmingham by these partner known each other since childhood,K.K & Ian.They pick the name(of the band) from Bob Dylan's song it was call "Ballad of Frankie Lee & Judas Priest".The first singer approached them is Al Atkins with the first drummer John Ellis.They start playing as blues then changed into heavy rock soon become heavy metal,then around early 70's they have financial difficulties & this led departure of their singer & drummer.Soon Ian dating with some women & she suggested him, her brother become their new lead singer Rob Halford.So he joined the band along with his drummer,John Hinch from his previous band Hiroshima.Later the record company ask the band to add another musician to their line-up before they record first album,K.K decided to choose another guitarist & he founded Glenn Tipton from Flying Hat Band as a new member then their released first album in August 1974 Rocka Rolla. Plus there some rumor that Coca Cola Company brought legal pressure because their album art almost similiar to their brand & after that they re-issue their cover art by Mel Grant.

hmm pretty similiar to Coca Cola right...?

The next album was Sad Wing's of Destiny in 1976 Les Binks replace John Hinch as a drummer for further album such as Sin After Sin,Stained Class & Hell Bent for Leather(Killing Machine) until 1979.Furthermore they released first live album called Unleashed in the East where recorded during Hell Bent for Leather tour at Tokyo in 1979 while their second live album called Priest....Live released in 1987.In 1980 they release British Steel with their famous tracks such as "Living After Midnight" & "Breaking The Law" & Dave Holland replace Les because part of band's direction.Dave continued with them until Ram it Down album in 1988 then he replaced by one of my favourite drummer Scott Travis from American band Racer X & continue their 12^th album called Painkiller which was release in 3 September 1990,listen to Painkiller & Between Hammer & the Anvil from this album.After Painkiller tour on 1991 Rob left the band cause of indication of tension within the band.

On 23 December 1985, there were two teenagers James Vance & Ray Belknep comited suicide after they listening "Better by You,Better Than Me".Ray end his lives with 12 gauge shotgun while his friend,James died after 3 years Belknep's death cause of overdose painkillers,moreover their  parents alleged that a subliminal message of "do it" in that song.However Rob stated that "do it" had no direct message plus the suit dismissed in 24^th August 1990. Later Tim'Ripper'Owen replaced him in 1996 & well you can this almost similiar with Maiden's case during Blaze Bayley.In this line-up released two albums which was Jugulator & Demolition,however Jugulator sell well but you know some fans like me dislike Owen.Moreover the movie Rock Star(2001) was inspired to his real-life story who was chosen become lead singer for Judas Priest.12 years later Rob annouced to the fans he would reunited in 2003 while Tim joined an American,Iced Earth.Soon they continue with the new album called Angles of Retribution which was released in 1^st March 2005 & finally the latest album came out last year was called Nostradamus.

                                     From(l-r):K.K Downing,Ian Hill,Rob Halford,Scott Travis & Glenn Tipton.

From l-r:Dave Murray,Adrian Smith,Janick Gers,Bruce Dickinson,Steve Harris,Nicko McBrian.

Okey before we start,I have to say that I'm not good in writing & this's the first band journal that I've made,so if there any spelling error or grammar error,I'm truly sorry.For today DMD(Daily Music Dose) is about the legendary heavy metal band from UK, next Judas Priest is...Iron Maiden.They survive in a music world for almost 30 years & they're the most influence by nowdays rock band especially metal band.Why I like them so much? Well my answer is they just like a story telling or like you're reading a fiction book,if you listening to their lyrics & they just like bring you somewhere in a fiction world.Plus they're so energatic than Priest either(sorry Priest fans) during live performance however never been to their concert(I wish want go) but I've seen so many live videos.Jumping around, destroy the guitar,throw the guitar,acting like manic or whatever & that I really like it. Of course their famous undead mascot Eddie the head, poking every member of the band during live,very entertaining isn't?.So let the story begin with early days....

Early Days(1975-1980):

The band started in 1975 founder by bassist & songwriter Steve Harris,after he left his previous band called Smiler.He got the band's name after seeing an iron maiden type of torture in movie The Man in the Iron Mask. In the begining the originally lead singer was Paul Day but he was fired because lack of 'energy onstage' then replaced by Dennis Wilcock.Soon they hired Dave Murray to become their guitarist.In 1977,Murray & Wilcock had an argument after a gig,Wilcock asked Steve to get rid of him.Later Wilcock left the band suddenly & Dave returned to this band,Steve hired Doug Sampson as a drummer & he's a friend of Steve since Smiler.The trio of them Dave, Doug & Steve searching for a new singer,then they meet Paul Di'Anno,had the audition & he was chosen become their lead singer. Next the recorded their demo The Soundhouse on New Years Eve 1978 ,after done it they went to Soundhouse.One of their track called "Prowler" went to number one in Heavy Metal Chart.In November 1979 they sign to EMI records for 3 albums.Then Doug Sampson left the band because of illness,they hired Dennis Stratton as duel guitarist & backup vocal.In the same time,they explained to him that they didn't have a drummer so he introduced Clive Burr to them & he accepted the offer.The band start recorded their first album in December 79 called which was self titled album.Than the artwork of Derek Riggs become their self-titled cover which was look like zombie with mouth wide open & sparky hair like a  bit punky & listen to their first intrumental song in first track of playlist below .

(l-r) Clive Burr,Paul Di'Anno,Dennis Stratton,Dave Murray,Steve Harris

Around 1980 after the Kiss tour, Dennis S. left the band & they replaced by Dave's best friends Adrian Smith from Urchin for their second Killers which released in 1981.Actually he been offer by them as second guitarist at first but he was busy with his band at that time.Later Paul left the band because of drinking problem & lack of desire to perform,so they replaced by Bruce Dickinson from Samson.

Golden Years(1982-1985):

(l-r)Dave,Adrian Smith,Bruce,Steve & Clive.

The third album The Number of The Beast & this first album they recorded with him,plus in America some of group complained that Iron Maiden was Satanic which is untrue & it because the album cover showed Eddie holding a Satan puppet.

The Number of the Beast based on Steve's nightmare after he watched the Omen II late at night & he quite scared.In December 82,Clive Burr left the band because of personal problems & he was replace by Nicko McBrian from French band called Trust,moreover listen to Where Eagles Dare where Nicko not using double bass drum padel on track #:6. Afterthat they released Piece of Mind album & a year later was Powerslave featured are Aces High, 2 Minutes to Midnight & Rime of the Ancient Mariner the first longest song they made.

Nicko McBrian sitting on left side.

Experimental Years(1986-89):

These years for the first time the band used a keyboard for recorded the album called Somewhere In Time(1986) same as the next album Seventh of a Seventh Son(1988).

Upheaval(90-93):

Adrian Smith left the band because of unhappines with the direction of band taking after experimental years.Soon he was replace by Janick Gers from Gillan,then release another album No Prayer for the Dying.In 1992 the album Fear of the Dark & a year later 1993 Bruce left the band went to solo career.

Janick Gers sitting beside Nicko.

Blaze Era(1994-98):

Hmph! A boring era begin with Blaze Bayley from Wolfsbane was choosen became their lead singer after a tan of vocalist audition. In 1995 released The X Factor,continue to next album called Virtual XI(pronounced Virtual Eleven) in 1998 & around that time Blaze leave the band.Seriously I never like this both album & I don't what song in there from opinion I think this's fall of Maiden (I didn't blame Blaze,just I don't like him singing).

Reunion(1999-05) & Recent Years(06-present):

Futhermore after more than five, Bruce & Adrian return to the band while Janick remained.Then begin to recorded the 12^th album Brave New World which was release on 29 May 2000.Three years later was Dance of the Death on 8 September & you guys should listen this song because there were three solo each of guitarist,they're Adrian,Dave & Janick on #10. The latest album was A Matter of Life & Death released on 28 August 2006 & one of their song from this album is Different World on #11.Finally they were to release full length documentary film in selected cinema 21^st April 2009,this movie filmed during Somewhere Back in Time tour between February & March 08.This movie titled Flight 666.So that it their information & if you guys want to listen their songs/album,I'll suggest you listen to their album/songs in this following(these list are from my opinion,which are the best):

For the Album:

1.The Number of the Beast(this one of my fav. album)

2.Powerslave

3.Seventh of a Seventh Son

4.Iron Maiden(this best for Paul era)

5.A Matter of Life & Death(this's best album for reunion).

 These are the following song you should listen: 

Key#:Track(s)

Lara White is writer for rock magazine it's called Kerrang.She having bad luck these lately,one night while she write the review about new band...she take bottle beer beside a computer & she about to drink,she take look it empty.She walk to the kitchen  open refragirator[sp] & there nothing left in there.She sigh loudly "I need a drink..."mumbled to herself then she grab house key on the kitchen table.She locked the door,suddenly she felt something stuck on her feet"Ah..!!" she fall on the strairs rolling,rolling & rolling & rolling again until come out from main entrance of the apartment & laying on the padestrians street.She feel almost fainted"Aaaoooowww..."mumbling herself & continue walking. She finally arrived at bar,she looking around find some empty seat but unfortunately only one seat left at the bar.So she sit it the bartender come to her to take order,"One beer.."she mumble to him,then the bartender serve her.While she drinking,she saw familiar group on a far right side,"Umm...excuse me,that group over there looks familiar to me...who're they?"she asked bartender,"Oh...that's Avenged Sevenfold,"Yeah okey,I know just want to make sure...."she looking at the liquor inside the bottle only quater left,"...umm could add one more,please,thanks"she order at him.She  take out her wallet & she found out 50$ only left inside,she heavyly sigh"I forgot to widraw,what wrong with me today?!"she tapping her head,"You know what I'm sorry could you cancel my beer...I think I've one that should be enough,thank you"she chuckled,suddenly a man voice coming from beside her"One beer is NOT enough..."she look up beside her.It was dark short hair man with light green eyes & he smiling widely,it's Zacky Vengeance rhythem guitarist from A7X."One glass for her,I'll pay for her & could you refill this glass,thanks","Thanks,sorry make you into trouble..."she said shyly."Not at all,I saw you not enough money to pay it",the bartender serve two as he order."Umm...What's your name?"he asking with his sweet smile,she rubbing her hands"Lara White..."answer nervously then he creased forehead"I heard your name before...","It's in Kerrang Magazine,yeah I'm writer for it,usually I'm writting on review for new band section & sometimes on band interview".He nodded lightly"Anyway you want join us drink,it's right over there...?"he's pointing his on the right side,she saw Syn & Johnny waving at her.So she accept his offer then he introduce the members & start chatting random stuff until late night.

Everyone completely drunk including her"I think...I need go home now...it's already late...bye guys...whoops!"she accidently kicked the chair & fall on the floor,everyone in the bar look at her"Never mind...she's fine!"Matt half yelling told them,"I'll take you home..."Zacky picking her up"No...I'm fine...my house just few blocks away"she half chuckles."Then let you walk back home...alone...if anything happens...","Okey...okey take meh...home"she cut him off & they both say goodbye to members.Soon they arrived at the hotel,she stare at the building"This isn't my home..."she said to him,"Well this place is more nearer then your home,since I can't drive & we don't even walk properly so I think we should stay here for one night".So she agree what he said,they heading to the upstairs while on they on the way to the room Zack push her a side,start kissing her & make out.Then she push him to stop"Zacky...Zack...stop...stop!!"he pull away"What's matter with you?!!"he disappoited."Shhusssh!!Not...here...this place is unsuitable...what a room?"she whipering.He smile"Genius!"he whispering ,take her hand heading to it & he unlock the door thus she whining"Zack...could you please hurry up...".When the door open,he  carring her like bride & throw her on the bed plus he lock the door then he jump land on top of her,he take off his coat so is she.They start kissing each other,he slip his tongue into her then they take off each other pieces until they naked & start make love.Finally they stop after 1 ½ hour,Zacky collapse on her then she stroke his hair & both of them heavyly breath.He move away from her then she getting near to him & lay her head on his chest,he place his lips on her hair while stroking her hair then he pull blanket & cover them both.She rubbing his chest & kiss him,soon they falling asleep.

On tomorrow morning she wake up & look at table clock shows 9.00am,she cover the blanket to her face then she realize that she was naked.She looking around,it wasn't her room & she see someone sleep beside her,she get up slowly look closely to him.She jerk her head a bit "Ha! I slept with Zacky V???!!! I must be DREAMING!!"she jaw drop & poke him once but he unmoving,she cover her mouth unbelieveble,it's real.She get up from the bed slowly soon he changed position,she quickly replace with the pilow & he hugged it but he still sleep.While that,she picking the yesterday pieces & put it on she grab the keys she walk slowly to the door.She unlock the door make sure he didn't a wake she outside the room & run staright to her home.On that evening while she doing her work there someone knocking her door,she stand up & went to the door lazyly,she peeking at the door it's Zack."I know you in there,Lara"he said,"Oh My God how did he found me?!!"in her thought"How did you found me?"she asked with bitter tone."You left your wallet..."she immeadiately went to the room checking her jeans last & wasn't there,she really left it.She open the door & take her wallet,close the before he saying anything"Thanks!"she said from inside,"Lara can we talk for minutes..."he bagging,"Look I know you to apolagise me & I accept it beside I want apolagise you either because we both drunk last night"she still inside."Thanks,but beside that can we be friends?"he ask politely,"Speaking of 'friends' I don't think you meant that,I think you meant opposite that..."she said bitterly,he silent for the moment"Fine,I admit it but in the same time mean I want that again...NO...I...I meant I DIDN'T WANT THAT & lot of woman that got just want have night with me they fade away".Then she crease her forehead"Like I didn't have a one with you..."she said,"At least you didn't do perposely[sp]","So..okey...if I didn't do perposely we can be friends but if...I do perposely we can't be friends is that what you mean?!! What the hell is that?!!"she start yelling.He scracthing his want give answer"Look you I telling you truth mostly got a women is a whore & I don't even know they are!!! But at lease you are normal women you,NOT a whore for all this time I want someone like you but...fine I'm out of here"she heard his footsteps going downstairs.She felt sorry what he said,she immeadiately open the door but stuck with hinge & she unlock the hinge,follow him"Zack!!Zack wait!!"she calling him.Suddenly something stuck her feet,fall again,she rolling,rolling then hit behind him & laying on top of him."I'm sorry,I'm always being like that...."she still laying her on his chest,"It's okey..."he grunting to get up,they both sitting middle on the stairs & she begin to talk"Look...I felt  sorry what you said...well anyway that your fault,you simply trust all over women plus not everyone are good","I know it's my fault...I'm so naive at that time"he sigh & silent for the moment then he continue again"Beside like I said I want someone like you...it's hard  to find it & finally I found it but not today,it not my luck thus isn't good if I forcing to be friends right?"he snorted & he sigh look at his watch"Probaly they waiting for me I've to go now..."he leave with sulking but she hold his to stop him then he sit back"I think, you really mean it,it just me dirty thoughts & not because you're famouse or I'm a fan girl,I'm NOT REALLY but I can admit it",she looking down for moment"And I don't have any boy-friends since I start working thus can we more than that?"she asking him shyly,he face puzzled"We just know each other since yesterday..."he widen his eyes while scracthing his head then she giggles"I'm just kidding...I accepted what you said,we can be friends"they both stand up at ease"I'm just kidding too"he smile then he kissing her & pull away"Actually I really like you...I meant not because last night of course but since you my offer...I can wait"he whipering & nodding at the same time,"But the way kissing just now, doesn't meant like we're friends,it's sound  more then that..."she crease her forehead while looking at him & there silent for the moment"Oh...who cares!"she continue kissing with him suddenly voice of man from the upstairs"Get a ROOM!!"they both look upstairs then both giggles"You know what I'm going give something, hold on"she run to her house the she returned while holding some card"Here...call me & that hand writting one it's my home number just in case if I wasn't in my office but I more prefer you calling me at night"she whispering inches from him & give last kiss.Zack give last kiss to her then go back to the hotel where his members waiting for him.

Syn laying his head on Mag's lap while driving his SUV to the hospital,"Brian stay with us okey,you're gonna be fine"says Zacky,"There no traffic on the road we can reach ASAP,okey Brian stay!"sasy Matt focusing on the road.He breath heavyly & grunted in the same time"Push & pull that damn thing in your body Brian!!"says Rev to him,"I'm trying & how the hell I'm suppose to pull out these bullets on  my chest!!"he said back to him."Towels"says Mag to Johnny,he pass on her while Syn try pull bullet from stomach first & he did pull out,throw it away.He moaning loudly,breath faster & heavyly,she place the towel on stomach & the chest,"What about on the chest?"she ask him,he shake his head"No,I can it's more hurting then just now"he said in one breath."Hey...guys I just...wanna say...I'm sorry"he said,"Dude,you didn't do anthing wrong to us,okey & we want to say that we sorry too"says Zacky look at him from front passanger seat,"No! I'm sorry I did lot bad thing on you guys...maybe you didn't realise..."says him but interrupt by one by band members.They kept continue argument between them until Mag speak up"Shut up!!!You want Brian die here or what?!!Let him rest God sake!!!"she shout with tears come out,she heard Brian whispering to her 'sorry'.Then Zacky poiting hospital few metres away from them"There!!We're almost there Brian just stay with us.Come on man there no traffic at all,just stay alright!!"says Matt take short look at him then focusing on the road."Mag,....I just wanna say...I'm sorry..."she shake her head & shush him"Babe,you didn't do anything wrong to me..."says her.Matt parked his car exectly in front emergancy enterance,one of the nurse come near to them"Hey,you can park here dude!!","It's emergancy,my friend been shot call the doctor!!"says Zacky to the male nurse.While Matt try to open the door & it's stuck,"We're here"says Johnny to Syn,"But why Matt didn't open the door?"ask the Rev to Johnny."Babe...one more thing I....wanted to say....I love you...I've done my job...to protecting you...I love you then my life..."he wiping her tears with thumb while he smiling at her.Then his vision become fade,Mag call his name few times & about to call everyone but Syn place his finger to her lips'No'he whispering to her.She kiss him for last time & pull away once Matt open the door"Why took it so long?!!"Rev mad at Matt"It's stuck all the sudden,Brian I'm sorry"he pull out him carefully while Rev hold his legs.They place him on bed & the nurses put oxygen mask on him,he still look at her & holding her hands while smiling.Johnny parked the at parking lot,while they carry him on the way to operation room"Don't cry..."he whispering to her,"Take care our child...",she look shock after he said that to her."How did...","I've already know since that dinner...& tell the baby...daddy always love you..."he take off the neckless from him & give it to her."It's for you & the baby..."he smile at her & she saw his eyes almost closed as the reach at the operation room.The nurses stop her from enter,she keep crying in the room & Matt try to comfort her.

Three hours later,the doctor come out from the room while remove the mask & glove from him.They immeadiately raise from the chairs come to him"How's he?"Mag ask him with voice broke.The doctor take deep breath & sigh,silence for a while"We've already try our best..."he take deep breath again"&...I'm sorry...we're lost him..."he patting Matt's shoulder & he remove it from him,Mag without realising her tears begin fall.She almost fainted but Zacky got her,she keep continue her tears,Matt kicking dusbin & the rubbish spread away"Damn it!!!"he said.Four months later,she already got a baby boy then they come in,Matt sitting near to her while the other around her bad.They talking about random thing until Zacky come out the old topic"If Brian here...he would happy...I think he proud that he become his father..."he tone getting slower,Rev elbowing with clear throats"Sorry"he whispering again.She smile at him "It's okey...he is happy become his father.."she rubbing slowly the baby's head.Matt change the subject"What are you give his name?"he ask,she look everyone & look at the baby again still sleeping"Dawson...Dawson Haner"she kiss baby forehead.

THE END

Actually this about Gerard's[MCR] story found in Quizilla but it's too short,so make it longer & change the charactors[sp].Plus the origianlly main charactor (in my first thought) is NOT Brian[Syn] or A7X & the setting is not present.The setting is around early 80's in around England & the main charactor[sp] is Dave Murray (during he's a young of course) or Maiden's members band but Maggie still remains.I changed because there is only few of them like Iron Maiden anyway I think most of you didn't know who are they...

The Main:

Synyster Gates

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Dave Murray

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A7X

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Iron Maiden

She woke up & she found out she's naked & she take blanket to cover it,beside her is yellow piece of paper like a note.She take it & read stated there"I'll be back at night"she smile then straight to shower & make up the bed.Plus,she return to her house for while clean up the messes until that evening.By at night,she come to his house she enter saw him place some food on dinning table bought from restaurant."So when you want go back?"he mocking her,"Why you me get out from your house?...Fine"she said."No...no...I'm just asking...actually it's kinda fun when you here..."he chuckles so as she.Three month later,she invite him & his band to her dinner.After they done dinner,sudden she felt sick while washing dishes with him"Are you alright,babe?"he ask,she cover her mouth & shake her head,she immeadiately run into bathroom.

Few days later,she take pregnancy test in her bathroom then she check it's positive.She shake her head"No...no it can't be..."so she recheck again same result no mistake.Then she try to call someone but she cancel,she suggest kept the secret from anyone except him & tell him when she's ready.She open the door & close it ,she turn jump out saw her husband in front of her.He look at her hand saw holding something,she look at it & about to throw it but he grab her hand,take that thing.He look at it"It's positive isn't?"he ask her but she didn't answer thus he drag her to bed & chock her"Who you slept with?! Tell me!!"he shout at her."You!!"she answer,"Liar!!"slap her & struggle her"Who you slept with?Tell me!! Tell me!","Get your hand off her!!"Syn pull him from her then she breath heavyly & he punch him.He come to about to carry her but his feet caught by him & pull him fell on the floor"Mag! Run!!"shout at her,"Brian..!","Just do what I say!!"he shout while drag by Nick.She immeadiately run downstairs,Nick about follow her but Syn pull him punch & smack his head on table.She run with carefully,she reach at the door & open it saw Zacky in front her,she jump out again."Mag,where's Brian?"he ask her,"Help him he's in trouble,he fight with my husband!!"Rev immeadiately enter the house.While Syn & Nick grunted,Nick searching something in cupboard in quickly,Brian saw him.He take the chair about to hit him but Nick got him.'Bang'heard by Rev even the other down there.Her tear beginto flow,she run to upstairs pass Rev but the trio down there call her but she keep going....What she see her lying on the floor bleeding on his head & pieces of wood speread[sp] everywhere then she saw Syn resting at the wall with his blood flowing from his stomach."Oh my God Brian!! You hurt!"she run to him & hugged him.They pull away"I'll be fine.."he whispering to her,she crying in front him"Don't cry..."he smile.Nick raise his head & shake it,he saw gun nearby him in front him.He take & aiming to Syn,he saw him & push Mag aside'Bang,bang!'he shoot twice through his chest.She shout his name few times then Rev enter & take piece of wood"Hey asswipe!!"smack him with it until the wood broke.Nick pass out again,Syn lying on the floor he heard her call him & his vision become fade away...

It's almost two months,Mag been torture by Nick,it happen almost everyday,evertime he got back from work.When he arrive at home the first thing he do is hitted her & it would be worst when he been scold by his boss or drunk.Syn wasn't at home he still busy with the tour around the world,she can't even call him because her always watching her & heard who she calling.The bruises & scars become increasing all over her body,she even can't count how many of it & how many she been hit by him.One day he hitting with belt while she been tie with cuff at sofa armrest.Suddenly someone knocking the door,he sigh madly"I'm coming hold up!"he push the sofa aside so that cover behind the wall & he walk toward the door open it. It's Syn,he look suprise when he saw Nick open the door"Yes?",he quickly try find better answer"I..I'm Brian..Haner,I'm Maggie friend's...I just want to give this flower to her as a gift since I moved here"he said,Nick thank to him."Sir,mind if I ask where's she?","She's not here..she going out for a while"he immeadiately answer."Hey wait! You're Synyster Gates right?","Yeah","Well you suck a good guitarist for nowdays rock band"he said with smile.As she heard Syn's voice,she raise from the sofa & she saw him about to leave,she try to call him but her mouth been cover by cloth.Then he disappear from her sight,the door close by Nick & he place the flower on the table."Wow...you've got amazing admire.."he tied his belt on his hand & continue hitting her.

ONE...

Two weeks later,Nick was gone that morning & Syn begin enter her house,he's knocking while call her name in whispering.He turn the door knob & it's unlock he enter the house,he found out the living room very messy.He straight up to upstairs he heard shower running from master bedroom.He enter it then bathroom,he saw the shadow of shower still running he slide the curtain & he saw Mag lying on bathtub full with blood all over her body & scars.He immeadiately called 911,then she woke up from bed she found out she wasn't at her home.She was at white room with bright white light,beside her is Syn"You're okey?"he almost whispering,"Yeah...what happen to me?"she ask.He gulp"You're fainted...& the doctor said you lose lot of blood"he said.They silence again"Two weeks ago I send some flower...I expect was you to open it but the was a man...is that your husband?"he ask,she just nod"You know,you can get out from here when everything is done okey?"he said half anger & half not.Later days, she arrive at home"Brian...I don't want to sleep here.."she look down & take deep breath"Then?"he ask,"I know I shouldn'd ask this...mind if I sleep at your house for few days...because I don't want remember what happend last two weeks.My place full with bad memories"she said hopefully."Sure,I'll clean up the second room..".She pick up some clothes from closet while Syn clean up some messes in second room for here,nearly night she went to bed after they had dinner"If anything goes wrong,you can come to my room...if you wanted to...it's 24 hours"he chuckles bit & she smile.Then she says good night at him,"Hey...don't forget to take medicine"he smile at her then she walk to the room with smile too.Two days later,she become better the apin at that night begin to fade away since she sleep at his house.On day he wasn't home,he helping some band for recording album & spend time with his family.Every night he brought some food from the restaurant & in that she had the dream about him again,Nick.She dream that he shot Syn then she woke up from the bed without realise her tear begin fall,she straight down have some drink.She begin felt afraid...afraid losing him,Syn because he's the one make her happy,he's the one make her live changed & he's everything...Then she went upstairs straight to the bed,she changed position so many time but she couldn't sleep,so she went to Syn's room.She knocking the door,she heard"Come in"open the door saw he's typing something in his laptop.Then he close it once she get near & sit on his bed,"What're doing?"she ask,"Nah...just right some song for new album"he said with smile."Hey,you look sweaty are you alright?"he ask,"I'm fine thank you"he show poiting finger wait for the moment,he went downstairs take some beer soon he arrove at his room & he give beer to her"This make you feel better"he smile & she thank again."Are you dreaming?"he continue his question again"Yes","What all about?".She silence again"You...been...ki..you know what I can't"she refuse,"No...no it's okey please say it"he said."You been killed....by him...my husband...Nick"she almost cry,"Aww...babe it just a dream.."."Most of my dream become true Brian!"her tear begin to fall.Then he crouch & wipe her tears with thumb"If you die,he will continue torture on me & I didn't want lose you..."she sobbing & he sigh"Babe,I promise everything going to be fine & I will protect you no matter what happen...","But..".He place his finger shush her"Don't.."& he get to her.Their nose touch each other & he exhale his breath then he press her lips,he slip his tongue into her.They pull away with heavy breath"I'm not going to dissapoint[sp] you,I promise"he said & kiss her again.

MJ want make out scene I think better don't but if you wanted to, I can message you... 

Next morning Mag prepare her breakfast suddenly she someone knocking the door,she open the it is Syn standing in front of her & she about to close the door but he place his hand between it.He grunted the door hitted his hand,she widen her eyes after he done that"I came here to apologize...I..should keep an eye on him..more"he said,"Never mind,it's not your fault"she interupt him about closing the door."But...not just me...him too..."he push Danny to her & kicked his legs make him knees to her"Say your sorry..."he smack his shoulder.""I'm sorry...I was drunk last night...that why I can't control myself...would you forgive me?"he ask hopefully,"That's it?!"says Syn to him,"What you me to do,man?!"said Danny to him & they continue argument until Mag stop them."Alright...alright stop it! Apologies[sp] accepted"she said then she let them in.A week later she got a call from her husband,Nick won't be back this week & she follow Syn to the tour.They went to certain place in America to replace the previous show because Matt 's voice,everytime after their show they stairght ahead to the bar.Everyone enjoying drink until late night except Syn & Mag return to the bus,he drag her into his bunker,"Which one is your bunker?"she ask him."There..."he pointing nearby the window,she sit on the bed & he crouch below her.He begin rubbing her thight,the he kiss her until they heard some mumbling from outside.He open the door it's Johnny[bassist] lying on the floor he drag him until to his bunker.She laugh a loud about that,"Well I think that it...soon everyone back here..goodnight"he give kiss to her,"You too.."she said then she walk to living lying on the sofa & fallen sleep.Soon they done certain show drop her at nearby transportation.He give quick kiss to her,she says farewell to the band & she got taxi.They saperate each other in opposite side,couple hours later she finally arrive at her house.The next day,she clean up her house before Nick come back,by the time at night she prepare dinner for him & wait him come home.In the same time she felt somethig it's not right,something would happen to her tonight & she wait him again....again...& again...&..again.She give up & she having meals alone,after that she dishes stairght to upstair done brush her teeth gone to bed.Late night she heard someone enter bathroom,then the shower open,she didn't move at all until the shower stop.Then she turn over it's her husband done shower while dry his hair with small towel."Hey..sorry wake you up"his sinister smile appear then he crowl to bed & she reverse herself"Don't be afraid I'm not gonna hurt you..."he place his hand at her cheek.She remove him from her"Don't make me hurt you..."he sigh begin anger,he rubbing her thight & pull her into him.She deserve a cold kiss from him & pull away,she spilt on him directly to his face.He wipe out & look at it"Babe...you braking my heart.."he said coldly & slap her face,smack her on bed,begin rape her.She scream for help but isn't working what she got his laughing then he shut her with his kiss just like Danny did but worser than him...

Couple weeks later,she headed her boyfriend show,Syn that he give backstage pass before.This they have show at their hometown,live in LBC & she sure Syn would be happy for that.She finally arrive at the arena,she walk to backstage & stated there 'The Band & Crew only' the bodyguard stop her she show the pass they let her in.Once she got in she saw Syn warming up with the guitar same as the rest of the band,he look up he saw her smiling at him begin  walk toward to her begin to talk.Soon the crew announce them"Five minutes left guys!"he walk away from them"I have to go,Babe"he give quick kiss to her"Good luck!"she shout at them walking through the hallway.Soon she walk to the stage stand beside Johnny[Syn's bro] for few minutes almost an hour,she walk back to dressing room.She open the door she saw Danny try to open the beer"Hey"he said,"Hey.."shyly."Where're you going?"he ask,"Bathroom"he give direction & she follow it then she come out from bathroom,she bumped someone"Sorry"almost whispering & look up it's Danny again."Don't be.."he said with smile,she give excuse to him"Where are you going?" in drunk slurr,she didn't answer she keep going & he grab her arm"Maybe we can talk.."he smile again,"I don't have anymood!"she said coldly.She about to let it go but Dan drag her into deam alley & slammed her on the wall.He begin to kiss her & slip his tongue into her,she bite it ran away from him.He follow her while she throw the to him,the he got back & continue his make out.He begin to tear her shirt & she immeadiately kick his stomach hardly,ran away from him."Come back!!"he shout at her,Johnny saw her ran toward with tears"Hey..hey..what wrong?","Ask your friend!"she shout at him,he keep continue look at her.The band begin to come in,Matt saw her picking up her things"Hey"he said,she bumped his shoulder & everyone look at her until reach at Syn."Hey..hey..where're going?","Home!"she admitted,he grab her arm & she grunted a bit"Mag! Who did this to you?!"he shock look at her been ripp at her shoulder."Maybe you should ask  your brother,Johnny,I want to go home".She release herself from him,he call her but she didn't stop & he sigh with anger."Where's Johnny?!"he ask everyone coldly one of them says at the back,he went what been told then he saw Johnny walk in from outside"What did you do Johnny?!"Johnny a bit shock all sudden Syn in front him"Wasn't me but him..","Who?!"he shout at him,"Danny,I she ran from him after I ask her what wrong & her shirt been ripp & she's crying"."Where's he then?!"he shout at him again,"He in the car,outside!"he bumped him & Johnny try to pull him but it won't work.Danny about to drive away stomp on the petrol(gas) pedal,then Syn stand in front his car to stop it.He hitted the car hood,walk to driver's side & hitted the window"Come on out!!" he said.He open the driver's door & pull Danny from it,he punch Syn first someone near them says 'Stop!' then he punch twice different side & smash him on the car"What did you do to her?!"he shout at his face,"Did nothing!"Dan shout back Syn punch him again"Liar!!You try rape her don't your?!"while Rev & Matt try pull him from Dan."Prove it!"he said,"Johnny saw her ran away from you with her shirt ripp off & she crying,you did her like that din't you?!"he ask him again.He didn't answer & all the crew try to stop him,he chock his neck & smack on it again"Did you?!!"he ask again,"Yes I am!! I didn't why every time I drunk become like this..".So he let him go walk back in,Dan gasping for air in the same time cough he stand up & Matt push him 'Better watch out after this"he said could & everyone walk to dressing room again.

It almost five since Mag & Syn known each other include the rest of the band ,the crews & friends.She never felt like this before,she got lots of friends since she meet him.For now,he away from home busying with the tour around America but he always call her.Sometimes he doesn't have much time to call her,she didn't expect him to her everyday,she understand his career.She is very lucky because her husband,Nick return when Syn wasn't here but in the same time she felt fear & anxious with Nick suddent attack like the previous.She relieve when Nick last her again,along in the house a week later Syn return from the tour & she suggest to herself not come over to his house.She know he still tired because tour,then he call her cell & she pick it up:

"Hello"she said,

"Hey,there!"his cheering voice,

"Brian,I thought you're tired,that why I didn't come over to your house today"

"Yeah...a bit,I'm calling because I want ask a question"

"Shoot"

"Are free tomorrow night?"

"Yeeesss....why?"

"Would go.....date....with....me...?"

She jaw drop all word she wanted to say didn't come out,

"Mag?"he asid make she still there,

"Yes,I'm here...I mean I didn't know what to say ,Brian"her voice broke,

"Well...so...?"

"Yes"her puzzled expression,

"Really?! Wow that great ummm....I'll see you 8.30pm,is that okey with you?"

"Yeah.."while she nod

"Well good...see tomorrow!Bye!"they both hang up.

Tomorrow is the day,she wake up from the bed & start her work as usual until that evening.She about taking bath then her cell buzzing incoming message from him,she pressed it & open"Go get ready"he said.After she done,she open the closet & choose suitable dress for her tonight.Next,her watch shown exectly 8.30pm she enter Syn's porch & he just come out from the door,lock it.Then he turn to her,he jaw drop look at her sleeveless black shirt & light blue jeans."Is this bad?"her worry expression,"No...no..no..not at all,you great...simple but great"they both enter the car.He start the engine until the engine roar the surrounding,he drive until the arrive at the restaurant.They sit at reserved table under his name,near by deck & begin their order.They done dinner,he drive somewhere far from the city"Where're we going?"she ask him,"Just wait you'll see"he smile at her & focus on the road.Finally they arrived at the cliff,they come out from the car & he went to boot pull out the container box."Why're you taking me here?"she ask again while he watching his watch"Wait just one minute...."then he count from '3...2...1' & he pointing out at the black sky say "Bang!".The firework begin shown on the sky"Happy New Year"he said to her & she smile at him.He pull out the two beers from that container,give it to her"Cheers"the drink,"I never celebrate new year since married & no one celebrate like this with me"she chuckles & she look at her watch exectly date 1.1.09 shown on it.They sit together at car hood & the fireworks still present on the sky"It's beautiful.."she said."Wait..I got something for you.."he pull out some stickers from his pocket then he chuckles"I know this kind a cheap & I didn't know weather you like or not...this's permenent tattoos...I got dragon,butterfly &....lots of more.So which one you want?","You choose"she drink a beer,"Umm...I take butterfly"he show the sticker to her."Where should I?"he ask again,she drink again & smile"Here"she pointed behind her shoulder.She begin to remove shirt & bra lace allow him to put it,he paste that sticker at she told & press it a bit.He remove that sticker,the butterfly tattoo shown on her body"So how's that?"he smile at it,she smile from tattoo to him "Perfect".He begin kiss her tat's move to shoulder,then her neck,her jaw & they touch each other nose...he begin kiss press her lips then he pull away."I'm sorry..."he whispering,"It's okey.."she press his lips,he slip the tongue slowly then she let him in.Soon Syn drive her home & finally arrived at Syn's porch,they both come out the car he follow her until front door."Will I see you again ?"she almost whisper,"Absolutely"he give backstage pass"Meet me there okey,come early"he give quick kiss to her & say "Bye' to her.He about to leave she pull him,kiss him again more longer then pull away & smile.He walk away until in front his door says again.

Syn had arrive at his home around the afternoon.Before he come out the car he saw Mag trying to carry heavy boxes.He immeadiately come out from the car & running towrds to her.She about to run but when she looked again it was Brian.She almost didn't reconize him the way he dress up sleeve less shirt,short pants & trucker cap."Wait...wait I'll help you with that"said Syn to her."Oh..no it's alright only two boxes left to carry"she panting carring boxes,then she put it immeadiately & she grunted try to lift up again."I'll told you let me help you with that"says him then she rolled her eyes with smile"Alright,would you please put in my store"she said.After they done he serve a glass of water to her,she suprisingly"Brian,I supposed serve this to you!"she sat on the couch.He chuckles"Well you carry those almost half of it,so you must be tired & thristy"he place the jag on the table.She refill water in her glass & she drank it until more than half of the glass,"And you carry those boxes more than half of it,you what let me take a glass for you"she got up & went to the kitchen.Then they continue their chatting until at this point,Syn ask her"Hey are you busy tonight?",she ask"Why?","I have a show with my band & I just wondering if you would like to come...I have backstage pass"says Syn."Oh...I'm sorry sorry I couldn't come because I got another show tonight"."Really, where?","I didn't know it's stated on backstage pass,I didn't notice"she chuckles so as he.They realize it's almost evening,he begin to leave her house.

That night he & the rest of the band members have sound check for an hour & the fans begin to fill up the auditarium.Thirty minutes before the show,Syn & Johnny grooming their hair with the gel,Zacky adjust his bow tie,Rev tied his shoes & Matt just come out from the bathroom.After that the rest of the band sitting on the chair around Johnny[Syn's bro] like semi circular to give them word.Then 10 minutes left they warm up with their instruments,Rev tapping with drumsticks on the table he didn't use the drum kit except Matt does not do anything,"There you are!"says Matt everyone turning including Syn & he suprise Mag come to his show."Hey,what are doing here?"ask him,"Come for the show"says Mag with exceiting voice"Matt give me the pass at that dinner"continue her."Yeah man I give it to her,come we got 5 minutes to go.Let's go!"says Matt."I'll see later!"says Syn walk out from the room.After the show,they directly headed to the bar Syn introduce the band member,friends & crews to her.Once they got the beers Matt cheers with them"To great show!!"everyone says same thing & the begin talk about the band,jokes & everything until 12.00am.Mag says goodbye to them,Syn send her home finally they arrive at Syn's porch."That the best show I ever had!"she says,he chuckles "Well anyway thanks for everything"continue her,"No problem"says Syn with smile.They silent for a while,she unbuckle the seatbelt & she look back at him.He give kiss to her & pull away"I'm sorry I shouldn't do that,assume that I'm drunk"he apologize & she chuckles,come out from the car so as he.She walk to her home,she unlock the door & look at him do the same thing she wave at him about enter her house.He wave her until she enter the house,the sound of unlock door & he enter his house.

Syn just woke up from the bed,he wash his face & adjust his hair.He wipe out his face with towel,he went downstars having breakfast.While he pouring the cereal into bowl,he saw Maggie drying clothes.He stare at her until the cereal pour out from the bowl.He realize try pour back into cereal box"Shit"he thought himself.He saw her went inside her house & door closed.He sigh a bit then continue his breakfast while reading newspaper,he flips lot of pages nothing news attract him only few pages he stay.Then he fold newspaper once he done breakfast,after he had shower he make shop list " 5 cans of beer...no...not enough for me & for them...make it...2 packs of beer"he said to himself while writing the list then he went to grocery & any markets near by.After an hour,he return to home he press the phone machine button & the machine voice announce 1 message while he pull out the things he bought it from paper bags."Hey Brian,it's Matt look we bought some pizzas & your favourite beer...40's...","Hey I just bought it!"he said to himself while he drink the beer."...so we about arrive there about 10 minutes & get ready"message end with beep tone,the machine voice announce received at 2.30pm.Soon he heard door knock he peeked at the hole he saw Matt holding pizzas.He open the door let Matt come in"Hey we came here to celebrate!"says Matt,Syn puzzled"Wow..wow celebrate for what?!"ask him to them once they come in while bringing beers."Celebrate you got a new home!"says Johnny while drink beer,Syn shake his while closing the door."Well...Bon Appeatite[sp]!"says Rev.They having some meals while watching TV"So...Brian how's that women?"Zacky ask Syn & he puzzled"What women?"he said,"You know last time.."Zacky try to memorize him."Oh...that she's fine right now.."he take bite of pizza,"Is she hot?!"Rev ask him with exceiting tone."Dude!She's 30 years old & she's already married!"says Syn,"Well where her husband?"ask Johnny,"I don't know she said he outstation"Syn admitted.Suddenly they heard someone knocking the door"I'll get it!"he said,he open the door it's Mr.Brown he bald with hair beside & he half African & Portugal."Hai,Mr.Haner sorry to interupt for the moment","Look Mr.Brown I'm sorry about my friends make some noise..."Mr.Brown intterupt him"I'm came to invite you to my minor party just around the corner & I came here not to complain about it"he said politely,Syn about to continue his apologize"What?D...Dinner?"he puzzled again,Mr.Brown chuckles a bit"Yes,You can invite your friends too..so you like to join?"he ask Syn,"Yeah absolutely"he said,"We''ll see you around 8.30pm.."Syn nodded & Mr.Brown walk away.Then he run to him "Wait, Mr.Brown have you invited umm...Maggie?"he ask him."Her?I did but I don't know wherether she came or not"Syn nodded again & he thank him again.

That night he & Matt talking to others neighbour,Syn wondering if she coming he wait & wait & wait again.Soon he forget it he continue chatting with Mrs.Brown until"Oh my god look who's here.."says Mrs.Brown with stunning voice.Almost everyone of them turn to the enterance it's Maggie with silver cocktail dress & medium heels.He suprisingly with her attandance[sp] & he saw Matt walk toward to her.He begin felt a bit jealous"For the first time she came to dinner"says Mrs.Brown,Syn a bit shock"First time?!"he ask her."Yes,she came to neighbour for the first time since she moved here"says Mrs.Brown walk to Mag.He just at her while she talking other people,he thought himself might people around here wondering what wrong with her,why she didn't come any invitation from neighbours for two years.

Syn calling Zacky"Hey Zacky are you still sleeping?","No,just got from the bed,what up?"."The neighbour..."Syn says coldly."Oh, the neighbour how's going?"says Zacky with exceiting voice"Thre's a women I think she's already married,she ran away from me..."says Syn."Huh?How come did you do something to her?!","No! I don't even get a chance to interduce myself!Once she saw she ran away!"shout Syn."Hmm...that's odd..","But they say,other neigbours says, she got problem.."Syn lowering his voice."What her problem?"says Zacky."Marriage Problem"Syn admitted,"Okey....maybe you gonna take time to get along with her"says Zacky"Oh, what about the others?"continue Zacky"There're fine,look I got a go lots things to settle & get along with that women","Okey,bye,good luck!" Both hang up the phone.

Three days later,Syn stand in front of the door,the women house.He knock it slowly & the women open it slowly only peeking"Hai I'm Brian,I'm new here..."then the door shut.Syn rolled his eyes"Fine!"he thought himself,he about to walk away from the door.Then he heard unlocking door,the door open & a women stood in front the it.Long dark brown hair with brown eyes,her with scars almost faded."Hai... come on in"she says with smile.Syn got in & sat at the couch"You sit here while get something to drink"she walk away from the living room.While Syn wondering around,checking her picture with her husband,her family & everything.Syn return with carring teapot & two cups.She pour the tea into each cup,once she done she begin to talk"So...where're you from?"she ask with smile."Oh...I'm from Huntington Beach...California"says Syn while taking a sip of tea."Wow!What a lovely place..anyway why did you moved here?"she ask again,"Well I placed my luggages[sp] everywhere after the tour,I didn't want put it to my room cuz our break break really short so...it's to pick those up & my parents always mad at cuz not enough place to walk in.."he chuckles so as she."So umm..what's your name again?"she ask with smile again,"Brian...Brian Elwin Haner Jr."he shake her hand with smile"I'm Maggie by the way,just call me Mag"."Where're you from & where're your husband from?"her smiled faded after he spoke the word 'husband'"I'm from Ohio,Texas & my husband from New Jersey.."he nodded a bit."Mind if I ask you a question?"he ask her & she nodded "Why're you running away from me,like last time?"he ask her.She look down for the moment"I'm sorry I shouldn't ask this.."he apologized"No,it's okey,actually I don't you scared because of me b'cuz of my scars"she lowered her voice.He apologized about her scars,she accept it."Can I ask you something?" she ask him,"Shoot","Do I know you from somewhere,like I just in MTV?"she curiously"Wow! I didn't know you're watching MTV type!Well I'm guitarist from band named Acenged Sevenfold with stage name is Synyster Gates",he nodded so as she.They silent for moment & continue their random chat"Well I think I'll stop here,thank you for the tea"Syn shake her hand"No problem"he come out from her house he waved his hand to her,so as she did the same.She look at him until he stood front his door, so as he look at her with smile. 

Buzzing of the alarm clock make her a wake from the bed,she tap the alarm clock button the buzzing sound it already stop.The clock shows 6.30am,she raise from the bed while her still sleeping then she immeadiately got up from the bed went to bathroom & wash her faces.She took rubber band tied her hair while she walk downstairs,she prepare breakfast for herhusband later her husband walk downstairs with luggages[sp]& he sat down drank some coffee without saying anything to her.When he done,he place his luggage into car boot she passes hand luggage to him & she about to kiss him but he refused with an excuse he late for flight.He immeadiately enter the car & start the engine,drove away.She close the door once he gone,she sat on couch,she remember anything about him before he become like this.She remember two years ago just married,everything he treat her nicely until one time the doctor annouced to them that there's no baby heartbeat.Later he came home in wasted,she convice him to stop drinking what she got....she been beaten by him.One time she mopping the floor,he watched her while take sip of beer.The she heard broken glass she turned around a bottle of beer broke"Opps...sorry just slip"he says with evil smirking.She took the broom,swap it then he hold her wrist tightly,she tried to let it go but he to strong.He drag her into room & make out with her,where she felt very pain then before....she felt like...been...rape by....strangers.She tried to let go again but he treated her bocome worst.An hour later her husband fallen asleep after he done his buissnes on her....she got up slowly went to shower,her tear begin to fall.She clean herself to erase what he done to her.A year later she tried to divorced her husband but her husband.The flashback ended,now she felt like slave to him,she have to treat him like a King,like a Prince.....he changed right now he doesn't treat her nicely like before.

On the morning all the neighbourhood in Moseley Street ready to go work,some of them jogging & some of them waving to their children ready to go school.Few hours later black Dodge Charges drove into Moseley Street until hit the neighbour's child statue in front the yard.Then the short man came out from the car & look around make sure no one notice,he raise up the statue.Another man with spike hair come out from the car a little bit taller ten first man came out from the car"Johnny,I've told you brake,brake earlier!!& look what've you done!!"says that man."That what I'm trying to do,Zacky...anyway it's just steel statue,it's not gonna brake it"says Johnny,"Well Johnny I know it just a statue but that thing wasn't yours that neighbour properties & if it your I don't care!!"shout Zacky to him.They continue argument until another man come out from the car tall,muscle & spikey hair just like Zacky with sunglass while holding piece of paper.He stood between them to stop their argument"Hey!Hey!We came here to help move my things,not talking about the brake or...statue!""Well...he started first!"Johnny shout & pointing at Zacky,he about shout"Shut up! I don't care who started first,are you gonna help me or not?!!"shout that spike hair man.They answer yes the truck just about arrive they begin pull out furniture so as the trio help them,they arranged all the things until few hour the trucker worker begin to leave them.So they take a rest about an hour,later Johnny & Zacky about to leave him"So Brian I think you gonna introduce yourself to this neigbourhood"says Zacky to him.Suddenly a girl around twenty"Hai!"she walk nearly them"Are you new here?"she ask them,"Him"Zacky & Johnny pointing at Syn"Ohh...I'm Cassie..you can call me Kitty"she shake her hand to him while that she rubbing his hand.Syn tried to let go "Yeah...I'm Brian these're my friends Johnny & Zacky"both of them waving at her.She chuckles a bit"Oh anyway do I know you from somewhere?"she bite her fingernails.Then high pitching screaching of tyres,Zacky & Johnny drove away from Syn's house.He tried to ran to them but they gone to far,she ran to him & hugged him.Then her father calles her name,she release him & he sigh relieve,he begin to introduce himself to the neighbour.Until the Sun begin to sink from the sky,he waved goodbye to them & he went back to his house.He switched the lights on so as the street lights thus he reliase that he not introduce himself to neighbour beside his house.Tommorow morning he introduce himself neighbour beside his house he a women rinse water to flower,"Hai there I'm sorry to disturbing you..."she let go water hose she immeadiately turn off the pipe & went insideher house."What a freak women!"he thought himself"She got a problem..."says an old women beside her house."Sorry?"Syn puzzled"She have problem with her husband almost 2 years,that's way she ran away from everyone""How do you know?"ask Syn to old women"Almost every night I heard broken glass,screaming & in one time I saw a man shadow hitting her"his eyes become wide."If like that why don't you call 911,he can go to jail"she shaked her head"It's not working we...all neighbourhood tried call them but they say nothing,they thought we're joking"she sigh look at her house"I don't know what to do.."she walk away from him & he look again at her house again.

This time is Synyster Gates with a women who has marriage problem

They finally arrive at the old warehouse,they park their cars near bushes so Mr.Rick & his bodyguards can’t notice.One of the policemen checking the situation of that area”Sir,they have mines 3 kilometre surrounding the warehouse away from the gates & I believe inside gates have detectors”says one of the policemen.Walter just nodded,Matt decide enter the from the roof & James decide enter through the main enterance while Matt in his thought dissaprove because it will risk James’s life.The main enterance not just full with mines even strick security,he plan that James enter from the enterance while him enter from the roof & the policemen as backup.Everyone agreed with his plan,Walter give them the bulletproof,radio & small camera so they can watch the situation.After an hour they already settle their weapons & their things,Vinnie wish them good luck.

All watches show exectly 12 o’clock even dashboard in every cars.Matt try to find some trees which connected to rooftops while James walk slowly to main enterance,the security saw something moving towards him.He ask who’s there while the shotgun pointing at James”It’s me father of Ashley Hetfield..!”James shout at him from distance,the security tells Mr.Rick through the radio then he deactivated the mines on the enterance area.James enter after the gates open while the security place the shotgun behind him & he knocking the iron door”Come in just push it”Mr.Rick voice from the radio,he push the door as Mr.Rick push the button from inside.When he enter the warehouse,the door automaticly close he turn back & look foward.There bright,empty space in front of him beside him are crates & have stairs on both side then he saw Mr.Rick suprisingly[sp] on upstairs with his bodyguard looking at him with smiling.On the other hand,Matt found suitable trees he tied rope on branch & he pull a little harder make sure their strong.He tied on his belt that given from Walter & he walk slowly on roof make their bodyguards didn’t hear it.There’s eight pieces of windows where four of it can watch the main inside warehouse another four of it can watch the room & he saw Ash inside there,she looks very weak then he kidnapped her.While Mr.Rick ask James”What are u doin here,James?”playfully”To find my daughter...”says coldly.He chuckles a bit”I’m afraid you been mistaken,James”says Mr.Rick,”If I mistaken,then U take my daughter in front of me & ur driver shoot my leg & shoulder or it just mistake u shouln’t take her in front of me...I saw u Rick!”he continue with coldly.Rick’s knuckles tighten on rail try find an answer while he looking down & sigh”You know what my friend...I felt like unfair to you..”he sigh,James puzzled when he said.While Matt try to watch Ash from window he saw another guy is limo’s driver,he’s like hitting her & Matt about change position but unfortunately he step on wrong places that make krack sound.The bodyguard beside Rick & the driver look up,the bodyguard enter the room & take out the gun pointing on the roof while try hide himself.Rick continue”And...not just only me felt this...even your at behind you..”James krick sound,he turn it was Lars”L...L..Lars?!”with shock expression”That’s right..James!”Lars said coldly while he pointing gun at him.”But...why,Lars?”he ask Lars,he a chuckles when James ask that”You know what James...what me felt jealous about you..””When concert fans out there encore they called your names,they didn’t my names & when we’re young lots of chicks come after you, you got a big house beautiful wife,beautiful daughter”he says while walking around James.James still puzzled”You know I’m who set up the bomb on your favourite chopper,I heard ur descussion about kidnapper between you & Vinnie...& I’m stole your from ur account.That amount to much for you James...too much!!”he half shouting at James.His expression from puzzled turn to anger”So I thought so...you’ve been missing this lately,aren’t you?!’says coldly & Lars just nodded his with chuckles”You kinda smart huh!You & Chuck are same people always respect you,likes you both but now it’s over..”he point the at James’s head”Wait,Lars before u shoot him there’s something I to ask...you know why Chuck fell into sheer James?”he shaking his head & he think again”He lost control tried to avoid the electric post that fell on the ground”,”No,I did the electric post fall & then they been electric shock..”James narrow his eyes”That means..””That means they died before fell into sheer & we thought all of them died but only left little Sanders.Like Lars said we always jealous you both..kill him Lars!”he shake his pointing at him.Suddenly bodyguard & driver thrown out from Ash’s room,they grounting one of them try to fight Matt.He shoot the guy at both shoulder & legs while Rick,the drivers try to run away.On the other hand,James took Lars hand & hit the rail until he release the gun.Matt running after them in the same time he shoot & hit the driver,fell by the time he want shoot Rick bullets are empty.He throw it & jump on Rick back & the fell to there from 1.5 feet,Matt accidently broke his left ankle after he miss landing.Rick is crawling try to get up he couldn’t the he been clog by the policemen & he rise his hand.While Lars try chock James & he kick Lars’s stomach,he fell near the gun.He about take gun Walter step his feet on his hand & the other hand raise.James running through upstairs, he saw her daughter faces full with bruises & scars aftr been torture by them & he hugged his daughter.Matt laying on floor try stand then he saw two standing in front of him & one them stung out hand,he look up it’s was James & her daughter.”My angkle are broke”he say weakly”Never mind I sponsor it”with smile,Matt reach his hand on him & grip with their help to stand hi up.

I know a lame ending...I'm not enough time tomorrow I won't been here for while but don't while I'm on holiday I would make another story.Here the main characters:

James Hetfield

Vinnie Paul

M.Shadows

Matt prepare his things,reload the gun & wear black hoodies include gloves.As he went downstairs,Ash follow him then they got into the car.He start the engine,drive away from apartment.”Where we’re going?”Ash ask him.”Some places...”he said without looking at her,”What places?””Old Willey’s Dock”he continue.”What for?”she ask again”I don’t know that Mr.Rick asked me..he said James lend some money & I’ve return u to him”.saying with a little mad tone.On evening,the sun almost gone another five hours & a half left, Matt went to small restoraunt bought some for him especially Ash because there’s another 3 hours to arrive at the dock.After 3 hour they finally arrived at the dock,place looks so old & dull.Certain floor already rotten any time will crash, Matt drag her & walk slowly on the wooden floor without applying real weight.Finally they reach at the conrete floor,that was realive & they wait until James come.Around an hour later,the black car arrive here & parked behind his car then the door open they saw James come out from the car.Matt place the behind Ash”Matt,you’re shaking are u okey?”She ask him”He won’t forgive me..”whipering to her,”I’ll explain to him..”with confiden tone.”How’re u goin to explain it’s not easy!”whispering a bit loud while James walk carefully on the wooden floor then he jump to concrete floor,he look back at wooden floor while carry bag.Matt wrap his left hand on Ash’s neck not too tight while another place gun on Ash head.James look up with suprise expression,he didn’t expect Chuck’s son would do this to him.Matt gulped after James look at him where Ash can hear him,”Throw the bag now!”he shout at James.James jaw drop for moment then he throw the bag to him & exactly hit his leg,he croach unzip the bag check the money make there’s no fake while the gun still pointing at Ash.”How many of them?!”he ask James,”Around...500000dollars”says James coldly & Matt a little nodd”We’re done!Here your daughter!”he push Ash walk to James.She look back at him”It’s over go..”he whispering to her,she slowly to her father in the same she look back at him quite few times & she hug her father while that James look at Matt with disgust & anger expression.Matt knows he will not forgive him,suddenly they heard engine roar with headlight come from behind him & he shout at James & Ash to run.There are limo in the middle beside it are choppers,the trio of it drive foward with high speed.Both of choppers’s rider holding a basball bat,one of them move foward than the others.Matt about to shoot them but the guy hit him & he fell.James & Ash run to the brige,the limo’s driver stung out his with gun shoot at them,James been shot at his shoulder & right leg make him fell Ash try to help him but he ask her to run.She continue run but unfortunately clogged by the limo,Mr.Rick come out & pull her inside limo make turn use another brige.The brige collapse after they through it while the police shooting at them but only one of the choppers hit,the rest are missed.Vinnie come from the run towards James,while crawl to Matt.Matt still dizzy a bit then James pull him up”Where’re they taking?!!! Why’re u doin this to me?!!”shout James at him,”I’m..doin this...cuz...I have to”he a ltlle it cough,”Ooo..hoh!!U doin this b’cuz u have to..huh?!!You say it’s done...then u taking my daughter!!What U gonna do for her?!!Huh?!!”shout James again.Vinnie”James,stop it...come on...”he convice him but he won’t listen until Walter came to James.”James,we got one of them..””Yeah!This guy!!”he pointing at Matt,”No, one of the chopper rider”Walter admitted.James saw the chooper rider trying to let from the police,he walk toward to him”Where’re they taking?!”ask him with anger”Just guess where’re they taking...”guy says with laugh.He hit him to police cab”I ask u again...Where..are they...taking?!!”he ask him again,the guy laugh a bit”The old warehouse around here...how come u didn’t know there’s only one warehouse in here but...it’s not easy you wanna come there u will find out”James release him & he still laughing.”That means Billy’s warehouse”says Vinnie,”Like he said,there’s only one warehouse in here”says Walter.”Let go then..”says James coldly,Matt stand up “Wait, you can’t go in there easyly”says Matt,”You stay out of this!!”James shout at him”You might gonna die..””Who cares as long my daughter is save!!”saying without looking Matt.”...as well as your daughter...”says him.”How do u know that place is unsave?”James curiously,Matt gulped”I’ve been there..”,”Wait a minute...u work with them,I mean it’s consider U work with them?!!” James’s voice getting louder.Matt just jaw drop try find an answer”I...I’m...sorry”his voice getting deep then James chock him & smash him on police car,”So u plan all this..didn’t u?!!”he shout at Matt”I didn’t they did!!Trust me I know how enter that warehouse!!”shout Matt with one breath.”Trust you?!!Trust you?!!How hell Am I gonna trust you?!!”he shout again,”B’cuz I belive still get a chance”says Matt then James release him”He coming with us”James says to everyone & all of them enter their car.Matt enter James’s car sitting beside him while Vinnie at the back.

Get ready for another action....

Day:11

Matt just wake up from the bed,he look at radio watch on table beside his bed it’s 9.00 a.m. & he realize he’s shirt less.Now he remember wat happen last night he look beside him Ash wasn’t there,he try to get up but the pain he can’t resist.He have to sideway himself to get up,then he take shorts & wear it.In the same time, he smell becon from kitchen thus he heard glasses sound.He peeking from blind,he see Ash cooking becoon & preparing breakfast.He wash his face & wipe it while he heading to kitchen,he throw the towel away.He wrap his arms around her waist,she jump out a little bit”Good mornin..”he kiss her head.She chuckles a bit “Good mornin..”she turn off the gas”Would u excuse me cuz I’m carring hot pan”he release raise his both hands,she place becon on plate & put pan in sink.Matt sitting beside her,he whispering”How was it last night?”she chuckles when he bite her ear”It was great.Now, eat it while still hot!”she give some pat on Matt’s shoulder,they start eating together.

{James’s bedroom}

James pull out black box from the closet,he open it full w/jewelleries[sp] inside there which belongs to his late wife.His wife didn’t care if he sell all of it when desperately including his mom jewellaries.Suddenly he jump up when he heard someone knocking the door.He immeadiately keep the box under neth[sp]”Come in”he said weakly.It was Mrs.Ulrich”Am I disturbing u?””Oh..no it’s fine,really,come in..”she walk slowly to him & sit beside him.”Detective try find out who put the bomb in the garage”,James just nodded he heard that without looking her.”Are u okey?..U seems really tense..”he just shock a little bit when she place her hand on his shoulder when he look at her, she immeadiately away her hand from him.He sigh”It’s nothing..””James..we know each other before I married to Lars,I’ve known u for long time...so please tell me..” he take deep breath & release”Jewellaries belong to Kate,she said to me before she died..”he sigh again “If I or Ash desperately need money...sell her jewelaries &...even my mom said that”he place his hand on head.”James,at lease she already told & it’s not like stole it without their permission..”,”No,u don’t understand as a father,as a husband.I felt guity to sell it,I mean...last time,Kate gone then Chuck[just guessin Mr.Sanders name] & now Ashley.In the same time,I have sell this for saving Ash’s live...”his eyes begin watery.Mrs.Ulrich sigh while looking down”James...I’m try to convice sell that thing but I’ve been through that before..”he raise his head & turn to her”Before,Lars & I married...I have to sell jewelaries belong to my mom.She didn’t mind if I sell because it’s not enough for wedding”.She continue again”She’s knows wat my problem between him...”she bit her lips”What’s the problem?”he curiously”He an alcoholic problem...all the money that he saved for the wed. has been swapt by him”her tears begin flow”I’m..sorry to her...I didn’t know that...It’s all my fault..I’m sorry”.She wipe her tears”No, it’s not ur fault..”,”No,I mean it...I ask him drink.Have some fun after the show just ,drink,drink until knock out..”.”Hey..it’s okey,James it’s already passed”while she stroking his back.They heard knocking harder & loudly,the door open”I’m sorry disturbing u guys,but the phone..it’s ringing right now”Vinnie anxiously,James immeadiately got up went downstairs.All the policemen wear earphones except Walter,he move his mouth”pick up”James nodded once he pick up one of the policemen click the machine to record:

“Hello”

“Hey, it’s me again...”

“Look tomorrow okey,I promise...”

“Would u...let me finish first?!!”

“Yeah..sure..”

“Since yesterday,I was thinking have a little changes..”

“Changes..?”

“Yeah heard right changes..”

“Wat changers?”

“U have to pay it tonight..no excuses”

“Wha...Are crazy?!”

“Oh..yea,I forgot U got problem with this payment aren’t u?”

“Yes...but please...give me a chance”

“Okey,well then tomorrow 12.00 am at Old Willey’s Dock”hang up.

He put the phone hardly,most of the policemen take off the earphone,”Sandy,wat u got?”Walter ask his worker.”They calling from...10th Avenue,Jacksons Street,Highlands Apartment &...room number is 450,level 1”.”Blue team go!!”Walter’s team dissapear from James house.Then they arrived at the apartment,they bash the door straight to the stairs.The team reach at level one with direction of rooms

400-450 on left side,so they went left & 450 is the last room.One of them knock the door but no one respond in there.They decide to bash the door,when the door open there was a man sleeping on the couch without awaken.The floor nearby him full with bottles of liquor,while Walter waiting his to called then his cell begin buzz incoming call”Yes,Detective Walter..””No any sign of them here,sir”Alright guys,move out!”he hang up.He passes news to James.

Tomorrow is the day,only 14 hours left James went to pawnshop sell those jewelaries.Not just one pawnshop he went quite lot of pawnshop he went get some suitable price until 12.00noon.He went to the car the door shut & he rest his body on passenger seat.Moreover,he release breath “So?”Vinnie ask him.He turn to Vinnie”How many that u got?”continue Vinnie”Well quite a lot,there’s nothing left it...around..600000 dollar..”Vinnie raise his eyebrow then jaw drop a bit.”Are...u serious?!”he disbelive”Yeah...!!”James answer with a little exceiment voice.Vinnie start the engine & drive away.

While Matt at his apartment,he about make a call to James by using his machine phone but his cell ringing it’s Mr.Rick:

“Hello”Matt

“Ah...thank God u’re here!”Mr.Rick with exceiment voice.

“Um...I’m always here,sir.If I’m not I went to grocery shop...”weirdy voice.

“Listen,uh...tonight U go to Old Willey’s Dock at 12.00 am”

“What for,sir?”

“James,send some money & bring his daughter as well...don’t be late!”he hang up.

Matt feel weird what Mr.Rick says & how does he know James goin to lend some money to him in his thought.He afraid being cheat by Mr.Rick like before but he’s not going that night he will beaten up.

Phew! Finally I can posted due buzznet problem....

Hehhehe... I know u guys love the last part...especially MJ...

Day:10

James insert the bank card into ATM machine then enter the code & he find out the money that he left only 20000 dollars.Then he reject the card & call the bank.The operator said someone who like him took 280 thousand dollar.James says wasn’t him so the operator immeadiate make a report to police.He walk toward the car,he close the door quite hard”Woe wat’s wrong?”Vinnie ask,”Someone just stole my money in my account”James says coldly.”What?!Who took it?!”Vinnie shock”I don’t know Vinnie..I don’t know..!!”shout James.”I think the kidnappers...”says Vinnie,”I don’t think so..I’ve never give an account number to him..”he said.”Dude,right now lot of things people can do,no matter how you keep it,people can steal or took it”says Vinnie,they paused for a while & drive away.When he driving on the way heading to home suddenly James’s cell ringing.James pick up the phone:

“Hello”James

“It’s me again..”anonymous{Matt}

“Look I try my best to pay u...”

“Do realise how many days left..?”

“I know it’s 4 days left...”

“Then..wat the hell are u waiting for?!!”

“Look my money in account has stolen,I try my best to pay it..”

“This isn’t time try your best,James!!It’s nearly deadline..!!”

“I..”James & Vinnie arrive at his house,walk heading to the door.

“I don’t give damn wat happen to ur in ur account...as long as U pay me in these 3 days!!”he hang up.Two second later,suddenly an explosion at the porch James & Vinnie duck cover their head with their arm.James immeadiately run into the porch what he see his chopper burning.”My chopper...”whisper James.All the neighbours come out from the house even Detective Walter & his worker come out from the house including Mrs.Ulrich except Lars himself.Matt jaw drop after he hang up the phone,he park his car just few meters away from James’s house.He immeadiately start the engine & drive away,he passing through in front of James’s house.He see James kneeling down in front of his porch & he saw James’s chopper burn out.That chopper given by his dad before he died.When Matt arrive at home,he slam the door that make Ash a wake from sleep,she peek between the blind to see outside of the room.She see Matt kicking one of tthe box then he take one of the glass & throw it to the wall.He thought that James will never forgive him if he knows this,he feel tired & lay down the couch,he fall sleep.An hour later,he heard someone hardly knocking the door then he immeadiately went to Ash’s room.He knock the room door,”Ash are u there?””Yeah..””Get ready”,Ash let him in she sitting on chair & Matt tied her up while they still knocking the door”Matt I ur in there!!Open it up!!”Mr.Rick voice.”Alright,alright I’m coming..!!”once he done he take a gun & put behind him then he open the door.”Oh we’re about to bash the door,so..may I?”Mr.Rick show his hand wants to come in”Sure”says Matt.Mr.RickMatt feels weird b’cuz Jake & Josh wasn’t with them.”So..u know why I’m here?”while he inhale his cigar “Debt..as usual..look, I ask him to hurry but he got a little bit problem with his account”.Mr.Rick exhale the smoke then he walk around Matt”Good that’s one wat about number 2?””Number two?”ask Matt,Mr.Rick looking up to Matt”Oh u didn’t know..?”while that one of his bodyguard checking Ash’s room,Ash she looking up see him.Then the bodyguard close the door,Mr.Rick snap his finger call his bodyguards”Mr.Matthew,didn’t know wat’s number 2 would u guys explain to him...?”Mr.Rick walk backward from Matt”Sure,sir!!”both of bodyguards said,Matt give disgust look at them & one of them try to punch his stomach but he guard it.He got bodyguard hand then pull it,he elbowing bodyguard chin but 2nd bodyguard pushing him until he hit the wall.The guard punch his stomach few times then he pull guard hit his head.He kick the b.guard chest,then he fall to ground.The first b.guard punch his face then his nose start bleeding & the guard try punch again but once again Matt got b.guard’s hand very harshly until the moaning loudly cuz of pain.He release,he jump & kick their chest with both foot,he fall on the ground same as b.guard.In the same time,second b.guard climb the dining table then jump & smack on Matt.He haunting moan,a little cough & blood flowing from his lips thus he can’t barely move.Mr.Rick walk toward him & croach”So let me expalin it again...the number two is u lie to me...”coldly Mr.Rick.”Lie?..I never lie to u..”Mr.Rick move his head pointing at Matt ask one bodyguard kick him once.Matt shouting once he’s being kicked”Do u remember when u say 250000 dollar right away....?”Mr.Rick ask him coldly,he just nodd a bit thus Mr.Rick take his hand & take out cigar from his mouth”& wat I receive was...half of it!!!”he press the embers of cigar on his hand.Matt shouting of pain then he punch directly Mr.Rick’s face & Matt try to get up but first b.guard chop kick on his back,he fall again.2nd b.guard pull him up “My turn!”as guy says he hit his head to head.Matt a little bit dizzy for a while he move backward,1st guy carry him & smack him hit the table glass.Few pieces of glass accidently stuck in certain body,Matt pull out one big piece of glass at his left shoulder & he crawl to kitchen counter try to help himself get up,one of b.guard “Aww,look at this baby try to get[chuckles]wat a whimp!!””Here let me help u”as 2nd guy said he pull Matt’s legs but he hold at the counter(it’s like superman where the hand infront & the both legs up).Then another b.guard climb the counter & jump,hit Matt’s waist.Matt shouting & moaning all together,both bodyguards lay him on dining table one of them hold his hands & another hold his legs.Mr.Rick take knife & heater then heat it up.He has red mark on his right cheek”So I guess...this’s revenge..”he cut a little bit Matt’s shirt & tear up,”Hm... nice tattoos but unfortunately you’re tattoos no longer here..”he scratch on Matt’s skin from the bottom until stomach with a knife,after Mr.Rick done scratch all over his body,he put heater where he scratches up & Mat shouting non-stop until night.That night,Mr.Rick already left his house & Matt can’t get so easyly.He try move slowly but fall from table into ground & accidently hit his scratches he a bit grount then he saw Ash’s feet.Ash try to get him up drag him into the room & lay him on bed she try find medicine.After few hour,she cured Matt scar”Why...are u helping...me?I’m kidnapper..”he ask weakly”No matter who u are u’re still Matt that I’ve known since childhood until..now”she said.She lean forward to him until nose touch each other,then he pull her into personate kiss.His tongue try to enter & she let it in,then turn into make out thus she pull Matt ontop of her.

Opps....sorry I was so hungry done this last scene....so who want deleted scene...anyone? :]

          Day 8:

Matt pull out all clothes in plastic bag on the floor & Ash wonderin wat Matt doin.”Wat w/the clothes?”Ash,”This’s for u,now get some shower.U didn’t take bath like more then 5 days”,Matt lookin at her & untied rope around her.”Umm...Did I smells bad...?”Ash ask Matt while bitin her finger.Matt try to sniff her arm pit then she smack his head”Stop it alright!”chuckles her & Matt.She bring those clothes”Umm...do u have any extra towel?”Ash,”Oh..here it’s alright it’s clean I didn’t use it.I use another towel”Matt.She take it w/smile”Oh by the way,u change ur clothes in that room on ur left side & bathroom also in there”smile Matt.”Thank you..”Ash & Matt singing”Ur welcome..” w/smile.

{James’s house}

All the police identify anonymous voice,Lars looking for James”Guys,guys have u seen James any where?”,ask Lars,everyone shaking head but one of the policemen says “No”.”God where’s he?!”thought Lars himself then he saw James park his car infront his house outside window,he walks to the door.Lars open the door & James about to knock “Where u’ve been?! Detective need see u..!”Lars angryly.”I know..I know he call me just now but firstly I need to see Vinnie...Vinnie!!”James.”Hey he’s waitin for u, upstairs as usual” Lars,”I know he said in phone but I to see Vinnie first, where is he?”,James.”Kitchen”James straight away to kitchen,he saw Vinnie try to open cover beer”Vinnie we need to talk..””Wait until I open it...””U can it that later..”James move him foward near frige[sp],he close the kitchen door & window the he sigh.”Wat wrong?”Vinnie ask.”I didn’t see him..”James”Who?”Vinnie ask w/ question face.James rolled his eyes”The Clown!...God who the hell I’m thinkin!”shout him,”The kidnapper?”ask Vinnie.”Yes!!”he shout again & sigh.”Everytime I drop the money...soon I look back it..dissappeared”,Vinnie humming a little bit while scraching his beard”I couldn’t missed the sight of it...if I missed the money must be dissapeared just like that”continue James.”By the way did anyone know about this?” ask Vinnie,James shaking his head”No,only U..”.”How much that you send this time?”,”Another 25”,Vinnie just nodd slowly”That means another 35..”James cut off “Dude, my money in account getting reduce,only 30 thousand left in there”James walk to sink & head down.”Do u have another account?”Vinnie,James paused for the moment[sp]”Yes..Yes..I do!But I don’t know whether they can accept..”James.”Maybe you can try but of couse not today..maybe soon”,”You wat ur right but I can’t delay this payment more then three days”,James walk away from Vinnie”Oh by the way,don’t tell Lars about this”James.”Don’t worry I won’t”Vinnie continue to open his beer*pop*it’s open & he drink it.

{Matt’s Apartment}

As Matt took the money from alley,he count until he done.Few minutes later,Mr.Rick’s bodyguard arrive at his house Matt give money to them.Ashley just come out bathroom while she dry her hair,she take one of a pair of jeans & one of the clothes.Matt closing front after both bodyguards away,he lock the door & walk toward the living room.Before he arrive to living room he saw Ash about to wear clothes,he backward few steps & he peek between the blind.She change her clothes to another clothes,Matt just stunt when he watch that,he gulp & jaw drop.He try to move closer but he accidently hit the tin box that make sound ”OW!”Matt whispering & Ash little gasp,she thought someone watching her.She quickly dress up & open the door,she look at Matt holding his foot while laying on the floor.”Oh...I’m just hit that box,that make me fall”,he chuckles while his finger pointing at tin box.Ash show him disbelive face”By accident of course..”,Matt “Okey..”she walk away from him heading to kitchen while she fill up water in glass.During she drink,she thinking about him, she knew Matt was watching her during dress up.She know him more then 10 years,she know his behaviour since he was a child until now & he a pervert during high school but she don’t know he still or not so as before.Matt stand up walk toward the living room while he sitting on couch, he thinking about wat he saw.The way she took off her shirt,”Damn...she’s hot”Matt thought himself while he jaw drop.Then he shaking his head & hit it with his hand “God Matt why don’t U forget about her!!!”he shout to himself,he realise Ash watching him with questioning face then her eye brow arise on left side”Are...U..Okey...?”she ask him.”Yeah it just want to forget about girl..that I meet last night”he explained.”Really?..But U didn’t go anywhere last night”,Ash said.Matt’s face turning into red,he try to find the answer”Yes..I do..Who says I didn’t?!...I went to shop bought some beer that all & some girl came to me tried flirting on me.I Couldn’t accept that.”Matt immeadiately look out the window try to cover his red face.Then she walk into the room with a little laugh with Matt act just now & Matt heard that.

What a lame sense of humor..-_-

Day 5;{Angles Park}

James come out from a car,he look around make sure no one notice wat he's doin.He carry the bag & place it like Matt says.

He return to his car drive & park far from that area.He watch his bag at the alley,suddenly he heard horn & he change his side where those horn come from but

They just people honk to pedestrian,then he turn back his at the alley the bag was gone & he wonderin who could take it,who could kidnapped her daughter.

When he return to home,he saw police car at the outside & he straight enter to his house.

The dining table become their computer table where they try to identify source of anonymous voice & who was it.

"Hey wat goin on?",ask James to Mrs.Ulrich "The police they tryin to help u",says her."Help me?!They're not helpin,they make trouble some & I don't want my daughter hurt"Says James loudly.

"U called them?!,U called them?!"says angryly James to her."No, is Lars called them to come here.I...I've already told my husband not call the police but he so worried",whisperin Mrs.Ulrich.

"Where's he?!"coldly James "He upstairs,in living room talkin to police on the phone",says Mrs.Ulrich."U stay there!"says James.

He went upstairs,Lars busy talkin to the phone then he notice James walkin toward & he hang up the phone.*Bush*James punch him directly into his face,

"Why did u call the police,I've told u before!!"James angryly while holdin Lars's shirt."Dude,I just tryin to help u man!!",Lars.

"Help me?!U just try to kill my daughter!!",James "Dude,she just like my daughter whatever happend I try to protect her"Lars then James release him.

"Look I Don't my daughter get killed,U know that pethetic guy won't let make a call & It'll be gettin worse",James.

One of policemen wear a coat come to James & Lars"I'm sorry disturbing u both, but who's Mr.Hetfield,James Hetfield?"ask the policemen.

"That's me"James."Well, I'm Detective Walter Duncan we got a report from Mr.Ulrich that ur daughter been kidnapped is that true?"Walter ask.

"Yes,since five days ago"James."Mind I have a word w/James?"ask Walter to Lars."Sure",Lars,he whisperin w/James meet him at downstairs.

{Matt's Apartment}

Matt throw some plastic bag on the floor make Ash awake.Jake & Josh countin money in the bag"Done

250000 dollars impresive for old folk & Mr.Rick will be happy to see this"Jake."Are U sure it 250000 dollars?"Matt"Yeah".Matt recountin the money & he nodded"Alright there's no fake & ur right it 25,wat're U waitin for?Send it to him",Matt.

Then Matt's cell buzzin incomin message,so open it"How's goin?Did u get any dollars?",Mr.Rick & Matt replay"Goin to be well & 250000 dollars

right away",Matt send massage to him then flick the phone.Jake & Josh bring the bag,they went outside & close the door.

"Wat're doin?"ask Ash."Look Ash I'm doin this b'cuz I have too"Matt."U forcin my dad to pay u for 250000 dollars?!"Ash.

"Actually,he not payin to me he payin to someone else..","Who?!","Mr.Rick!"."Sound familiar..",Ash"Of course he one of my father friend...& don’t know why he become like this like sometihng evil inside him",Matt walkin toward to window.”Why don’t work w/my dad maybe he can help u..”Ash.”No I can’t,I almost 12 years didn’t see him since my father died & I’m afraid he wouldn’t accept if I askin him to settle this debt”,Matt.”Well...why don’t u try find a job w/expensive salary”,Ash.”Ash u don’t understand they have duration to settle this & usualy incoming salary by the end of the month.I don’t have much time!”Matt.”How long?”Ash “2 weeks”sigh Matt then he sittin on couch.

“How much dat u have to pay?”,Ash.”U know wat! I think u should shut up put this thing back!”Matt take cloth walk toward her.”I need to know!!”,Ash.”None of ur buisness[sp]!”he tied cloth to her mouth.She muffle try to scream & Matt take syringe fill w/drug.”Sorry Ash,this isn’t right time to ask”,he prick the needle on her right arm & she fainted.

Poor that girl always been knock out by Matt...